Legend of Zeld: The World on the Other Side

[Princess Mary]

Before I start I would like to say why i thought of this idea and a bit of what it's about. First of all I always wondered what the other side of the world Hyrule is on is like. So that's where I got the idea for a brand new world consisting of three races which I'll tell you know in the story of. Also the main character i decided must be Navi. Many people hate her but she has the most mystery around her and is not all that bad. By the way this starts off when Link is placing the Master sword in the pedestal at the end of Ocarina of Time. Ok I think thats enough lets start the story.
[align=center]Chapter One:The Beginning[/align]
As Navi watched, Link stabbed the Master Sword in to the pedestal for the next hero if Evil were to rise again, but out of the corner of her eye Navi saw a light. Now this light was speacial as if a thousand different colors flowed through it in the fraction of a second. As she watched it seemed to beckon her, to draw her toward it. What was strange that this was coming from one of the windows and nothing could be seen past it. Only this rainbow colored shine. Hypnotically she flow toward it. When she was close enough to touch it, the light turned black. Not even black but darkness that felt as if nothing was there. A void of darkness spilled from it not the wondrous sensation as before. Then a hand of the void came foward and grabbed her and pulled her into the glass, into the void of despair. The darkness closed around her, reaching into her as if to pull out her soul. As she flew threw this place mysterious lights one by one attached to her as if to say "We are here do not worry."
Though these lights were soothing they could not stop the darkness from ripping her apart, making feel as if all the fears were being pushed into her and being surrounded with every new fear. Then she erupted through this void into a semi lit temple.
Lit by fires not fires that soothe coldness but fires that felt like a hurricane pushing only against you in the arctic. As she slowly tried to fly. but could only get an inch above the ground she found that she was on a window that looked like almost a duplicate of the window in the Temple of Time. The only difference was the markings on it. The markings of a Forced Transportation spell. As she tried looking around she saw darkness except for yellow eyes. And then a figure stepped forward. One of beauty and intimidation. "Hello fairy." said the person. His voice was deep, not too deep but deep enough to be intimidating. "W-Who are you?" said Navi. "I am Micorinaz, King of the Dezins." "Dezins?" "That's right you have not heard of this world before much less been here." "Let me explain who we are and why we have brought you." "But first..." With a wave of the hand he turns the dark room into a well lit one with a soothing glow. "Im terribly sorry but the darkness is necessary to get the spell exactly right. Now let me tell you about this land."
You see, we are Dezins, one of the four races of this land. This land is called Nyteria the other side of the world that Hyrule is on. In order to travel land to land you must use one of two ways. The first is the least painful but immpossible to get to and that is through Trias. We know that they exist but we can not find them. Then there is Forced Transportation which you came through. Anyways there are the Magicusses, Dezins, Rinoas, and Giones who live in this land. We Dezins live on the Cloud of Draconyza, Magicusses in the Ryuna Deserts, Rianos of the Star Sea, and Giones of the Nefrya Woods. We have called you hear because you are the "Savior" who will save this land from the Cryptos.

So thats it for Chapter One if you read this give me your feedback and I will try to continue this about every few days.
Also I will put a few notes about this.
Draco in Draconyza means "Dragon"
Giones' names are inspired by Giovannis "Gio"
Ryuna is inspired by Ninja Gaiden and Street Fighters Ryu.
Also as we meet more characters I will post something about how i name each race. Or maybe one that stand for all the races.

[phantom]

hmm cool, although that was a lot of infomation download in one moment. still trying to make sense of it. realy good though, keep it up!

[Evangeline]

Great, very weird that Navi is the MC, which is why I'm interested in this. Keep it up!

[Princess Mary]

Well guys I decided to write another chapter. Though its only been yesterday that I started it I couldn't wait to write the next chapter. I bring in a famed villain and item. Also give me your thoughts on ways Navi could fight as I don't know whether she should wield a sword (I know how she can) or use black and white magic. In anycase lets start this chapter. Also this is a rather short Chapter which I wrote just to give a little bit of backstory of who the villains are. And to leave off with a cliffhangar.
[align=center]Chapter 2:The Cryptos[/align]
The Cryptos are a band of Giones who worship the lost ruler of this kingdom. Many years ago we had a great king. He was kind and did not just eat his heart out and yell at servants he did chores as the other servants did. But then one day he stumbled upon the four Shards of Satia that gave him Power,Wisdom,Money, and Immortality. But this came with a price. He was corrupted by this these and became a dictator. Satia is the god of the Moon and the Sun and left these four shards for anyone who can find them. Eventually we led a revolt against him and became what we are now. Unfortunately the most we could do was seal him in the void you came through. The void has become corrupted and that is why you felt the pain and suffering of souls he can capture with the void to feed off of. Now the Cryptos are planning to revive him using the artifacts we took from him to seal him away. They are his Mask, Rod, Crown, and Cloak. "So who is he?" His name is Majora. "So what do you want me to do?" "I want you to get the Mask. It is the only one not necessary to revive him with but without it Majora will not be at full power and we might have a chance to beat him." "Right."
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Navi is on a balcony just outside where she was. "Well this will be interesting but tiring nonetheless. I just helped Link save Hyrule and now I'm on my own quest to save another world. I wonder what this world will be like." "I hate to say this but I wish Link was here. He would know exactly how to take this adventure on." Somewhere far away.... "Where the heck is Navi?" "I must find her by going on an adventure!! But first SIDE QUESTS WOOT!"

And that ends off the next Chapter. Im sorry if this was suprisingly short I just wanted to end it off on that comical note. Next chapter will be long I promise.
I decided to have Link pop in sometimes where he acts complete opposite to what Navi or maybe someone else says about him.

[Princess Mary]

Since Im going to be posting on Fanfiction.net (I will later) my chapters will be relatively longer so from now on Im posting in parts.
Also I like feedback very much. I really do. =D

[Evangeline]

The whole fact that Majora is in this has gotten me more interested in this fanfiction, I will follow it and be as up-to-date as i can, Keep it up!

[IamTheFusedShadows]

Very good story so far, I am interested in learning more about the other races. Keep it up!

[phantom]

btw I just figured out have navi can fight. the fairy hammer that ciela uses in ph. Or, you can add link in to the story, but just an idea. good second chapter, I actualy think you back story for majora is very good. Alot better then the backstory of mm....

[Nathan]

Good job, but I noticed a few punctuation errors. (Sorry that I'm being a buzzkill lol) Anyway, it seems that you will continue to make up these fanfics every few days. That's pretty cool.

[IamTheFusedShadows]

I noticed that Link is fighting Majora at the same time that Navi is fighting Majora, how does that work?

[Princess Mary]

I noticed that Link is fighting Majora at the same time that Navi is fighting Majora, how does that work?

Time warps. The Trias I mentioned will become important....[hr]
[align=center]Chapter 3:Part A[/align]
Somewhere deep below Draconyza..... “Master, we have found where this burst of magic energy came from.” “Where?” “On Draconyza, in the Trans Temple.” “That means someone was brought here, am I correct?” “Yes my liege.” “Who was brought here?” “Our mole is still trying to find out.” In Draconyza... As Navi watched the sun set from her view on the balcony she thinks aloud. “Im going to miss annoying the heck out of my friend. Flashback... HEY LISTEN HEY LISTEN HEY WATCH OUT HEY LISTEN! End of flashback... Good times, good times. “Hello Navi the Fairy.” says a stranger as she comes out on the balcony. “Hm? Why hello there. Who are you?” “My name is Moonia. I have been requested to give you a tour of Draconyza.” “Thanks!” “First we’ll go to Dragon Fnag Inn.” Walking to Dragon Fang Inn from the temple was a long one and though Navi has wings, those get tired too like our legs. After about an hours walk/flight, Navi started to get blisters in her wings and started to realize just how big this cloud was. As she flew along she noticed how almost everything was made of clouds in this city. The ground was like rock when she touched it and it had a faint yellow color/white color. (remember they dont have cars so they have to walk around or use horses). Though Navi felt like dropping to the ground, Moonia seemed like she could walk forever without stopping. In order to stop thinking about tiredness she started looking at the shops and people. The people seemed mostly Hylian like except for a person or two with wings. Most of the shops seemed regular such as restraunts and Inns or maybe shops with charms and scrolls, ink stuff like that. “Loonia can we stop for a bit? I feel like dropping dead.” “Why weve only went around the block 16 times.” “16 times is a lot an- wait did you say A block? Not multiple ones right? “ Yep” “......WHY WERE WE WALKING AROUND IN CIRCLES IF WE”RE GOING TO DRAGON FANG INN!?!?!?!?” “ Well it seemed like you needed exercise.” “EXCERCISE!?!?!??!?!?” “Yeah I mean you look bigger than most fairies so I thought..” “WE”RE SUPPOSED TO LOOK LIKE THAT YOU IDIOT!” “Really I didn’t know all fairies looked that fat.” “.......” This part has been censored for its violence and gore........Jk. As Navi flew they entered a humongous cave at the edge of the cloud. Stood there a building overlooking the edge looking remotely like a fang. “We’ll be entering through the bar because I know your tired.” As they entered the first thing she noticed was the smell. It was as if a dozen rotten Dodongos had exploded. As they walked through the door nearby she couldn’t help but think what could make that smell. Quickly she turned back to see a few dozen drinks being spilled on a drunken body. “Good god” she thought “this place is disgusting.” “Don’t worry the rest of this place is much more classier.” said Moonia as if she was reading her thoughts. Then they entered a humongous room filled with very posh stuff and 5 count it FIVE fireplaces. As she stared in amazement Moonia just walked along like it was something she saw every day. “Like it? Your room for the night or two will be even more glamourous. Meanwhile..... “SSSSSSSSSS!!!!!” “Stupid sages. Where am I anyway, this doesn’t look like the Realm they sent me to last time. Looks more like a sea....”
Notes: I put in one character and by one line you can already tell who it is I put in. DONT SPOIL IT! He will be revealed later on in the story. Also Moonia is important as you will find out deep into the story. She is also related to someone most know very well....If you cant tell I like to give you the idea of fading out with the periods........

[IamTheFusedShadows]

I look forward to the next chapter.

[darklinkpwns]

very nice

[Princess Mary]

Im going to need another day guys....I had deleted my stuff for the next part of the chapter....

[Princess Mary]

Well……here it is…..after rewriting it is here.
[align=center]Chapter B: Part B "Link"[/align]
Walking along in Hyrule Market, Link notices a small dog. Bending over he reaches to pet it and thinks of a funny thing to do. Reaching into his bag he pulls out the Keaton Mask. "Hello little doggy how do you do?" said Link in a scary tone. "I'm going to GET y- GAAAH SOMEONE GET THIS THING OFF MY FACE!". With the dog on his face and scratching him he quickly ran around and tripped into the fountain splashing a couple swinging around as they hug. Coming up from the water he find that his mask is ruined and the dog jumped off at the last second. Going off he goes into a corner and fires a Fire Arrow at the wall heating up the area around it and drying his clothes immediately. With a little singe though. Turning around he saw that the shop where he needed to go to. Walking into the shop he found that people were yelling at the shopkeeper. Trying to listen he could only catch a few words which were "BUT I NEED IT!!!" "MY DAUGHTER IS SICK!". He also heard the shopkeeper shouting back at them "IF YOU HAVE COMPLAINTS GIVE IT TO THE SUPPLIERS NOT ME!". After an hour or two when he had kicked everyone out he went up to him and asked, "Whats wrong? You mostly get your stuff from the Gorons, Deku, and Zora. Haven't they been supplying you?" "Usually, but I got from each basically saying 'We do not have the materials to make the supplies you need. We have sent all that we can make.' And what they made was barely enough to sell." Leaving the store, he pondered over why the different races could not supply the supplies. "Hmmm…..I guess this could be a new adventure sidequest." After a dozen days of planning and supplies buying (and grinding) Link set off on his journey. First off…….the Gorons.

This was a bit short but yes if you figured it out, Im going to write about Navi and Link's adventure every other part.