ww aryll saved!

[darklinkpwns]

i have an interesting story for you!
as link walked out of the forest he saw aryll standing there he waved as she waved back HOY BIG BROTHER! then a giant bird appeared in the sky! link jumped and pushed aryll out of the way. Link had been captured by the helmarock king who would help him now?
Link had been carried to the forsaken fortress!
well what did you think?
did i do ok? want to hear more?

[naruto8]

this seems interesting.....

[darklinkpwns]

im thinking of my next part[hr]
ok heres the next part!
Link was kept in a cell for a few hours. A man walked up too the cell,
hello Link... Link was confused so he scratched his head. You are wondering why you are here? Link nodded, the man took his cloak off.
I am the master of this fortress Ganondorf. You are the one who will save all of the Great sea. Darklink! Come finish your light form!
Ganondorf unlocked Link`s cell and dissappeared as Link jumped at him. the epic battle for the Great sea had started.
how was that!?!?[hr]
wow was it really that unpopular?

[darklinkpwns]

well heres the next
Chapter 3 The battle of Links

Link gasped as Dark link jumped at him. Link did a backflip just missing Dark links blade. Link couldnt defeat him he kept copying his moves jumping when Link attacked. Link knew he couldnt win this could be his final battle... Suddenly a bright light appeared on the sword Link was using. Someone was powering Links sword then he heard a voice. Link im powering your sword use it to defeat Dark link!
Link lunged at Dark link hit after hit Dark link was getting weaker.
then Dark link used some magic! Link was confused at what it did but all he knew was he had to finish Dark link. With one final jump attack Dark link dissappeared. The Link that walked away had a different sword knew magic and didnt like light. The Link that got away had an evil smile. Dark link had taken Links body.
well? anyone think that was good?[hr]
Chapter 4:
Preparing for the battle of the great sea

somewhere under the sea....
Master I have taken control of Links body
muuuuuhahahhaaaaa... Very nice job Darklink and Ganondorf?
He expects nothing.
Very good. Prepare the ships and helmarocks for our fight on the water too take the islands scattered around the great sea.
I will wipe out all the inhabitants that survived the flood all those years ago.

Meanwhile... My Princess I feel the dark energy we must prepare for the battle that is too come!
But Father we know Link will save us!
I... I no longer feel his presence.
What!?!?!
But even if we were to fight we couldnt all our troops didnt survive the flood!
Hmm... I have an idea.. you have the triforce of wisdom, ganondorf has the triforce of power, the legends say that the old hero also named link split the triforce of courage around the great sea... if we were too get the entire triforce i could summon all the troops back and possibly bring link back...
Princess Zeldas face darkened... We need to try.

[phantom]

zomg I likes it alot. pretty good stuff.

[darklinkpwns]

thanks im working on the conclusion

[darklinkpwns]

Chapter 5 Gathering the Triforce

So Zelda and the king of Hyrule went too search for the triforce of courage pieces. Thats all the pieces Zelda said happily suddenly the triforce fo courage flew away. It headed for forsaken fortress where it stayed. Zelda we must head for the forsaken fortress so that the triforce may become whole...
After a bunch of sailing, Here we are in the fortress. Suddenly Ganondorf appeared out of no where! I will have my wish!
Then the triforce formed in front of their eyes. The King and Ganon both reached out for it..
There was a bright light.. Then Ganon saw knights and standing in the middle was none other than Link...
Suddenly everyone heard helmarocks and cannons from ships in the distance...

[Nathan]

This is actually very interesting. But I would advise you to clean up your grammar, seeing as it would make your writing seem professional. But keep it up! I want to see more!

[darklinkpwns]

Chapter 6:
The Battle of the Great Sea Begins.

"The Forsaken Fortress is being invaded!" The group of friends and Ganondorf ran as fast as they could for the boat that had been forgotten for so long. It was being held up by ropes, so everyone began
boarding it as Link slashed the ropes. The boat fell in the water and they began to sail it. Once they got out of the Forsaken Fortress all they could see was Helmarocks and ships to about as far as Windfall island! "What do we do now?" Zelda gasped. Link knew what they needed to do. The only thing they could do is fight them off untill they found their leader. "Get the cannons set up!" Ganondorf ordered.
They took out ship after ship until they got to one island that looked weird. "I feel dark energy here." the King said. Link jumped off and looked around suddenly a dark portal appeared! Out of the portal walked Dark Link and a mysterious figure. If there were any problems in there tell me and Ill fix them ok?

[phantom]

Wait, it almost sounds like gannondorf is a good guy in this..I dont know if you ment this or not, though.

[darklinkpwns]

heh theres more to it in the end, if you wait

[darklinkpwns]

Chapter 7 The Final Fight

Gyahahahah... Suddenly Gannondorf had joined Dark link and the mysterious man. Link jumped at Gannondorf and Gannon teleported away leaving Link and his friends against Dark link and the man. After an intense sword fight Link was able to defeat Dark link! Then the man said, Good fighting Link... Link knew who it was
it was someone from Outset.(Link had a flashback where he was taught to wield a sword. Good fighting Link!) Link just stared at the man. It was Orca.. A once great hero had embraced the power of darkness.. To Be Continued

how was that for an unexpected twist? lol i had to give the man an idnetity so i used the first guy who popped into my head. Orca

[naruto8]

didnt see that coming lol

[darklinkpwns]

lol im just figuring out a way to end it..

[darklinkpwns]

Chapter 8. The Real Final Fight


Heheheh. Orca was taunting Link but when Link jumped at him, a portal would come and teleport Orca away. Link was just about to give up when his sword started to glow... Like it did before in the Forsaken Fortress! Link had a message pop into his head like last time... "Link...im powering your sword... attack when he tries to teleport. slash the portal!". So Link took the advice from the mysterious girl and slashed the portal. When Orca was out in the open the two engaged in a heated sword battle. For about an hour and a half all you could hear was (CLANG). Their swords clashing Link and Orca needed to end this. The two kept fighting and avoiding the attacks of each other. Another message was sent "Use this Link!". Out of the sky came a bow of light... After a few slashes Link shot the bow at Orca defeating the darkness! Orca looked at Link and said thank you for saving me. Just then Link still had so many questions... Who was the girl helping him.. what exactly happened to Orca? Still so many questions, but as they all stood there and watched the sun rise they knew they could handle anything coming their way. ahh.. so what do you think? what would you rate it? do you think i should make another thread with the sequel? tell me your thoughts ill listen

[naruto8]

i really liked it it was awesome. for the hole story i give it a 10/10 i was jumping out of my seat while i was reading it.

[darklinkpwns]

i really liked it it was awesome. for the hole story i give it a 10/10 i was jumping out of my seat while i was reading it.

hey thanks dude i noticed you were follwoing it until the end... but as for a second thread with a sequel? would you like to see that?

[darklinkpwns]

making an entirely new sequel! gonna be called " Wind Waker: The Lost Chronicles" check back regularly for updates on it
EDIT: people the first chapter is out on the new thread! its the name above ^!

[ToonLink100]

I thought it was really interesting! I give it a 10/10 cause I was at the edge of my beat reading it.