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    The Legend of Zelda: Hylian Patriots. chapter 1.

    CHAPTER 1: Old Link

    Hero's allway's die. there's no stoping it. In this vast land of Hyrule, there have been many hero's, many villains, many quests. but all those hero's have died...
    except for one.

    The sun is lighting up the sky.
    Castle town is full and lively. many people out today, shoping, playing, talking.
    So many people out, except me: the hero of time."Malon!! where's my red potion!?"
    i yell while waiting for my wife malon to get me red potion." I'm comeing, i'm comeing!" she says while running down the hallway of our house. malon is lovely women that i married 20 years after comeing back from termina. after we got married she opened up a milk bar in castle town. "Here you go link!" she says sounding worried."Finally!! What took you so long!? i've been waitin where all day!!"
    i said while i grab the red potion right out of her hands.
    "... I can't believe you!" She yells
    "What!?" i yell while i drink red potion. i glance at the window and notice a bunch of boys looking thought the window. it's the bombers gang. i'm about to tell them to get away but i'm interupted by malon. "You sit around all day! do no work at all! then yell at me! is this what hero's surposed to do!? your- you were the Hero of Time, but now you hide in shadows. your a Hero's shade." after she's done yelling at me i stare at her for a couple of seconds, then get up, grab my cane and go to the temple of time.
    "Hero's shade, yea right" i muble to my self, while
    walking to the temple of time. when i get to the temple of time i pull out the Orcarina of time, and play the song of time to open the door of time." she want's a hero, I'll show here a hero!" the door opens, but something's missing. Where's the Master sword! as i walk closer to were the master sword should be, the room starts
    flashing then turns all bright.
    i slowy creep open my eyes and see the sages.
    i'm in the chamber of the sages." Saria, Ruto,Darmia, Norbooru, Impa, Rauru! Guy's
    it's nice to see you again!" i say while looking at all of them. none of them reply. they just sit there and stare at me. "Guy's?" i say one more time. then Rauru replys "Link, you have done something very bad."

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    RE: The Legend of Zelda: Hylian Patriots. chapter 1.

    very good story but your grammar could use some work keep it up.
    Back to have fun, Feel like chatting? My Skype is Olddarklink. Wanna watch one of my let's plays? My youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/olddarklink Thanks a bunch and I'm happy to be back!

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